Your CAD model is looking good.
You probably only need 1 strut if your intent is to keep the head from falling when powered off. These dovetail columns have alot more friction than you think, especially due to the cantilevered mass of the head. My IH clone doesn't fall with power off (5tpi ball screw) and I do not have any gas struts. If I loosen the gibs and press down on the head I can make it fall but barely..
Also, to keep the bottom end of the strut from walking around, why not put in a thin plate with a hole to locate the strut, with the outer edges of the plate constraining it inside the column?
For the Y axis - check that the ballnut isn't going to restrict the movement of the saddle away from the column. I recall having to open up that little bit at the front of the base to get even front / rear travel with the ballscrew in place. The ballnut is larger than the original bit from there.
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Mike