Hi again Lucas.
This layout looks much cleaner. Thank you for your effort!
However, the display is much wider than this:
the distance top to bottom mounting holes is now correct, and so is the distance of the right mounting holes form the connector pins. The distance between left and right mounting holes is 92.5mm centre to centre (at least on mine). The display PCB is 98mm x 60mm and the display itself is 97mm x 40mm (outside dimensions of LCD frame).
That gives you even more space to play with
Maybe you could make all traces the same (larger) size to allow for masking or etching mishaps for us amateurs
Cheers,
Joe